To feel the witness marks of endless blue
Silk falls calm on waves as the sky touches
That which only it sees
Cast on endless seas that reach out
Touching softly the tender spaces
Where life clings in solitude
Reeling in memories like silver trinket fish
Flopping about at the bottom
Of life’s boat that drifts
Aimlessly into the mist.
Froth as sweet as a shake mixed
By the hands of the universe,
Stirred and blended into intoxicating thickness
Treasures unearthed beneath
As the tide pulls out into the deeper darker blue
Of days that move along on the surface
Yet below there waits a world of visions,
Of colored stars and rainbow fins
where the air leaves us helpless
To stay for very long,
And we bob along like sea birds
Riding waves like errant surfer boys
Skipping school and finding calm
And peace in hanging on
riding the swell into home.
Hmmmm. Can’t help you with the transporter….although I know they have planes,trains and automobiles😊 loving it here, slowly getting in my groove and the ocean is divine….enjoying the warmth and the humidity is actually lessening my arthritic tendencies now too which I see as a divine bonus😊 thanks Elouise…..you can always come visit too you know😊
Peace and love always,
Kim
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Dear Kim, I just caught up a bit and am almost breathless at the creativity your new surroundings are giving you. The photos remind me of so many things I miss by living in the Northeast. I don’t mind missing the heat and humidity of the South. But the slower pace, gorgeous water, slow waves and sand? ….A writer’s paradise! All I need is a Star Trek transporter! 🙂
Elouise
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So nicely put Jane, truth reigns always😊 reflections can be distorted but words often give glimpse below the surface.
Peace and love,K
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Yes. I think this is what some people don’t understand about poetry. Since it refers inward the world we perceive, it records our individual lives better than prose or painting.
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I’m a few minutes drive away, which is fine by me come storm season, love the schools of rippling fish, had to get it😊 thank you Jane😊
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Lovely, both words and image. I grew up at the beach and miss it so much…
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You should!
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Awww….I take that compliment with much thanks sweet friend😊
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You’re way more fly than Cinderella.
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Laughing. Yeah.
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Ah, that peaceful blue ocean. You leave me wistful…
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As I would hope you would…kind of the easy going bad boy image in a way, huh? Smiles😊
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Happy beach moods….things I think of as I’m on the floor bleaching and baking soda scouring the grout😊 easy to see myself in other places besides cleaning, right? It always works, makes it go quicker…..I wonder if that’s how Cinderella got her start?
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Nice poem. Love the imagery of this line —> “Riding waves like errant surfer boys”
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This is such a lovely image:
“Yet below there waits a world of visions,
Of colored stars and rainbow fins
where the air leaves us helpless
To stay for very long,
And we bob along like sea birds
Riding waves like errant surfer boys
Skipping school and finding calm
And peace in hanging on
riding the swell into home.”
Delightful, feel-good reading this one is.
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Thank you Russ, the Ocean and blue skies keep supplying me with endless ideas….I love it here…suits my clothes😊🐟🐠💦☀️🌴
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I especially love these lines:
“Silk falls calm on waves as the sky touches
That which only it sees”
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