Elements of a life
Inside and outside
Find me there
Window of the soul.
Stand behind glass thoughts
Reflected
Eyes opened to light.
I feel everything
Empath world
Close doors to the pain.
And now, our prompt (optional, as always). Today, I challenge you to write a lune. This is a sort of English-language haiku. While the haiku is a three-line poem with a 5-7-5 syllable count, the lune is a three-line poem with a 5-3-5 syllable count. There’s also a variant based on word-count, instead of syllable count, where the poem still has three lines, but the first line has five words, the second line has three words, and the third line has five words again. Either kind will do, and you can write a one-lune poem, or write a poem consisting of multiple stanzas of lunes. Happy writing!
True, I always seem to forget somewhere in the middle!
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cheers cheers! lol 😀
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Super duper Andy…woohoo…it’s a party,😊
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lol alright alright I’ll ‘try’ 😉
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Thank you, started off drawing a blank…typical of me…I let it morph to where it was going…hope it made some sense😊
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Let’s see how I hold up for the next 29 days….always a fun challenge though…looking forward,to reading yours😊
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I know, I tend to like the shorter ones myself😊 but always a great exercise at getting me out of my comfort zone…never too late….hint…hint….
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I love this Lune!! So much said in so few words. Just beautiful!
Peace
Mary
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Happy NaPoWriMo and what a Great Way to start it off 🙂 Now Im off….to write a Lune 🙂 Thanks Ever So for yours, so Lovely!
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Napowrimo! I wanted to join but I can never seem to write long posts 🙂
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