Our lives flicker in the lightest winds
like candles perched on water
moving with the tides,
We glow on darkest nights beneath
the moon above that aches to be full,
we sit quietly in the moment
watching as time slips past
and the wick falls below the place
where it can hold ground,
a dying sound as it fades away
and we are left with only the beam
of the orb at night
grand white circle moving slow
as we too grow weary,
making our way to the comfort of sleep
dreaming of tomorrow
and a thought of eagerness to see
a full sight of the universe.
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/candle/
This is for the Daily posts prompt candle. I haven’t done these in a while and thought I’d jump in again and attempt some prompted poems. Hope you enjoy.
Thanks so much Jacqui,
I’m so happy you enjoyed it and for taking the time to let me know, I always smile to see new faces. Peace and blessings, Kim💕
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Thank you Suzanne, so glad you enjoyed it and also for taking the time to comment, your words make my day😊💕 peace and blessings, Kim
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Wonderful. I’m glad Diana posted this.
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You’ve painted a lovely word picture with your poetry. Beautiful. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I always enjoy the full moon, makes some a bit crazy but I find myself more balanced when Luna is fulfilled 🙂 peace and love and much thanks, Kim
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The moon longing to be full… Simply lovely!
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Thanks Elouise,
Still often searching the skies for some much needed thought vacation, peace sometimes fleeting yet I just look up and find it was there all along💕😊 so glad you enjoyed it and thank you, shout out to Ms Lucy💜💕
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Your last two lines got me–a thought of eagerness to see a full sight of the universe. Just beautiful from the opening line to the hope-filled closing. :)Thanks, Kim.
Elouise
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You’re welcome Phil😊 Found you in my spam folder….not sure why? Have a great day.
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Thanks, will do, Kim. As I’ve said before, your poetry speaks to me 🙂
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I found the about page, it’s below a few posts at the bottom and the top post I’ve written….it looks like I’ve duplicates down there…I will see if I can fix that too…happy Sunday😊💕
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You can use first and last, Kimberly Laettner. I had an about page….before I changed themes….now I’ve got to go check and see where it went. You are awesome for doing this, wow, what a nice way to wake up. Peace and happy Sunday, looking forward to seeing it😊
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Hi Kim, I’m going to share this next Sunday on my Blog Share. I couldn’t find an About page or your last name. Do you want me to include your full name as the author or just first name? I’m happy to do either and am excited to share your work 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you boundless beauty, so glad you enjoyed it😊 peace and blessings, K
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Thank you, been playing with some prompts lately to change it up a bit….having fun and enjoying it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Peace and blessings, Kim
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Good morning Phil,
I’m looking forward to many more good reads in your world, just popped in and loved what I saw. Peace and blessings, will see you soon. K
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Well done!
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Lovely! 🙂
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My submission for Candle
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/candle/
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Your words have a calm elegance and such a beautiful flow. So glad you visited. Look forward to reading more. Peace, Phil
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Thank you Claire, I’m so glad you enjoyed. The almost full moon is inspiring my creative light these days 🙂 peace and blessings, Kim
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Beautiful!
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Your poetry resonates, Kim. Company is fun, but it feels good to get back into the routine. Happy Writing.
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Thanks D, I’ve had company all week but they left this morning, I am happy to be back to normal , I love company and this time around I actually found time to fit in some writing. Thank you for your kind words and always, for your support. You are an amazing writer and I take it as high praise, truly. Peace and love, Kim
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Gorgeous. I love your poetry. ❤
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