In the quiet of a morning caught
the spellbinding sight of a rising sun
caught whispering to the soul
caressing the mind with thoughts of a day to come.
Eyes find their way through dream states,
memories of lingering images like wallpaper
strung up on the walls to see
moving through the museum of surreal things
we touch the fabric of that which we cannot name.
Resting on the tip of tongue
we hesitate perhaps a moment too long,
and watching as it fades from sight
the mirage ghost-like and cherished
then silently let go.
Who are we in these moments,
caught between wake and sleep
in Neverland worlds of beauty we wander
thoughts tracing words on invisible pads
and indigo ink mark our passage
lest we forget where we had been
on our return to those foreign lands,
as the clouded gate creaks with age
we gentle push forward and enter
the place where thoughts sit waiting
remembered once more.
Hi InfiniteZip. Familiar surroundings often make even a harsh existence more bearable! Thank you for liking ” Mates Flat!” Peace and Best Wishes.#TheFoureyedPoet.
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Thank you Lyrical Quill,
Your words made me smile and I give much thanks for you comment ❤
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Wonderful piece..
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thanks Roland, so glad you enjoyed it, I try to embrace it all, sometimes with gentle life nudges but it’s always good ❤
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I love the thoughts and feelings this poem evokes. Our lives are full of mystery if only we can embrace it. Great poem Kim.💐
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indeed, “Who are we in these moments…?” There and not there. Almost but not quite. Clear and confused. So much quiet noise fading. Beautiful and mysterious.
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Yes, you know it’s good when someone can feel it. You’re welcome and thanks for posting 🙂
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You’re so welcome. 💙
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yes, always my favorite moment of the day, almost like a sunrise for the soul and mind ❤
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Thank you 1 wise woman, I’m so glad to know this touched you, it’s always the best compliment a writer can get ❤ peace and blessings, K
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Thank you so very much, I appreciate your comment so much and I’m happy that you enjoyed it ❤
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Thank you, thank you, bows and smiles and perhaps gets a twinge of a happy blush ❤
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Thank you Megan, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. ❤ Peace and blessings, Kim
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Thank you so very much, I’m glad you enjoyed it ❤
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Wonderful Kim.. that place between wake and sleep.. The wisps of moments gone forever.. Yet they remain within for an eternity. ❤
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Beautiful – love when I can feel the words, deep in my heart. Thank you for writing ❤
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A truly beautiful poem 🙂
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You gripped me here:
“Who are we in these moments,
caught between wake and sleep
in Neverland worlds of beauty we wander
thoughts tracing words on invisible pads
and indigo ink mark our passage
lest we forget where we had been
on our return to those foreign lands,
as the clouded gate creaks with age”
And, it is quite the delight. Brilliant effort, Kim.
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Incredible work. It is very thought provoking and it flows very nicely!
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Beautiful poetry, Kim.<3
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