Bang bang,
One after another
slamming the doors to the past,
nothing to see here,
move along folks…
ain’t no rubber neckers needed to view
the scrapings of the pieces,
yesterday…well….
she’s gone taken the train
to better sights
than this here place.
This one here…
well, she’s a sticky one, that one…
still clinging,
not quite ready to go the distance
but she’ll come round
just wait and see…
like these mirrors you’ll see new things
exciting and laughable things
on the other side of the show…
distorted,
she ain’t seeing it all quite right…
out there livin’ in those stars….
those shiny sparkly things…
can’t believe in ’em I say…
smoke and mirrors,
nothing there….
watch me
what I say ’cause I know
been there
done that…
nothing there and no lingering baby
so just keep on moving on,
come along and follow the rest,
they know what’s what…
smarter than the rest I always say….
wait,
where you going?
No, don’t you run away…
I know the truth…
can’t you see?
My truth will only cost you
a dollar or two…
as the song plays on…
As he slips away
knowing that she knows
deeper than his senses will ever give….
space….no cost in being
no price in becoming one with the light,
the truth….
she walks away smiling
purse tucked tight…
no quarter given
she slips through the next portal
for tomorrow waits….
her kind of place….
off the path of the side show barkers
bartering with their nothing
as the paint peels on yesterday
she repaints her tomorrow
pretty carousle ponies
and dreams waiting in the light of a new day.
This was a stream of consciousness piece while I was listening to old Elton John songs…didn’t edit much to it, just let it ride😊 the pic was so cool and I had to use it….an Internet find😊 wish I had that much pic taking talent💕
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This has sort of a cosmic, haunting feel to it and the image is most suitable, Kim.
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Thanks Lisa, I could see the shivers aspect….I bet there’s lots of lead in that peeling paint too😁
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I found myself reading this twice because it was just so captivating. But that photo gave me the shivers.
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my brother is a great guitar artist, perhaps I’ll send it to him and see what he comes up with 🙂
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if you know someone with a guitar you should ask them to play behind this
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I was watching an Elton John concert on tv as background noise as I wrote this,
just a stream of consciousness piece that I let go where it wanted to 🙂
photo found on the internet but I thought it was very cool and fit the piece 🙂
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love the photo. These words perhaps set to music?
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Dreamers rule, and I was watching of all things, an Elton John concert on tv and just let my mind roll with this one😊 some days you never know what will rise to the top and spill over😊💕 thanks E💜 and 💚 to L too.
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Love it! Especially the voice–as in ‘where’d ya learn to talk like that, huh?’ 🙂 And the photo that just adds to your description of contrasting visions of life. I vote for the dreamer! 🙂
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Thanks Janice, I let my mind take control on this one…slow and steady and where it will….ha, thanks so very much😊💕
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Wow! I really love this … the pacing, the pairing with the tunnel of doors… and this is great: ‘bartering with their nothing as the paint peels on yesterday she repaints her tomorrow’ 🌹
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Thanks Kunal….stream of consciousness piece😊
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It was one of those stream of consciousness pieces….sometimes the mind wanders in strange places😊 thanks Derrick😊
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Thought-provoking
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Wow!
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