I drafted a circle in the sand
digging deeper and deeper
waiting for the tide to shift,
to change and move
filling the indent
pooling and swirling
reflections of clouded skies
and just a hint of sunlight
whispering through.
A moat around the castle,
grains of sand built up and smoothed
circles upon circles rising
backdrop like a real life play
no curtains to hide
just pieces of structures standing strong,
built to withstand this life.
I imagined it for you
cast of dreams and beauty and words
bit by lovely bit pieced together
hand crafted with the wisdom and spirit
that fills to overflowing,
and I gave you a key
to unlock the door to the magic
yours whenever needed
and the coffers are filled
with all of the needs
priceless things indeed
to carry you through
I give this to you
with a special hope that you see
how much you mean to me,
where you are and where you’ll be
just close your eyes and drift away
to castles by the sea
and I’ll meet you there
where the horizon finds the blue
and slips away to unlock the stars
above our heads in their splendor
guiding us home.
7k? wow, my computer and mind would have a meltdown I’m afraid ๐ you’re a very brave woman…or you’ve got lots of junk mail ๐ peace and love, me
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This was a beautiful poem Kim.. Just lovely.. and I am just back tracking through my email list of over 7,000 ~Yikes!!.. since I was just using the reader.. And came upon this.. โค sending Love
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Hey Pragal,
for some reason you ended up in my spam folder….eeeks….not acceptable. Thank you my friend and sending peace, blessings and keys to the castle of my heart โค
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thank you Derrick โค sandcastles and dreams constantly on the build ๐
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Beautiful metaphorical image; beautiful sentiments
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It’s no doubt a lifetime process. ๐ Seems like every day there are new lessons…. and away we soar farther and higher! ๐๏ธโฎ๏ธ๐
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Thanks Betty, me too, one of the greatest gifts I ever received upon graduating from high school, a statue of a sand castle telling me to believe in my dreams….it only took a few? Many? Years to realize the truth of creating and loving๐๐โฎ๐๐ป
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Oh, I love building sandcastles and you’ve built one into a beautiful metaphor – a gift of love and friendship.
Most lovely poem, Kim! ๐
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This is so deeply heartfelt!
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Thanks G, perhaps if I don’t trip on the banana, I could slip you one….I know….I’m so a-peeling…ha๐๐
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Thank you Carolyn, so glad you enjoyed it. Peace and love, Kim
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Thank you Helene, I’m so very glad you enjoyed it…built with love๐๐๐๐
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I would like to say what C D-W said; but, my pencil is broken. G:)
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Beautiful!
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This is magnificent, so full of sentiment and truth.
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I am glad that you do,
It is my treasure of good things for friends far and wide,
Those in need
When needed
Thoughts built into beauty and always an open door
With love.
As me,
Always๐
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That last half
Where it says
I give this to you
A tearful joy
Simply Beautiful
as sheldon always
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