In that space between breathing
as the exhale happens effortlessly,
before the inhalation of freshness
with windows rolled down
and the scent of the sea fills me,
I gaze into the gold-red light
sitting on my shoulder like a small bird
and eyes rise to the rearview mirror,
I gather the colors in my hold
feeling the gentle peace fill my soul.
I leave behind the sky
as I move my way in the snaking line,
red tail lights glare like angry eyes
I follow along like a wayward puppy
eager to escape and run free from the crush,
lights turn and the movement surges
cattle through the chute
heading for destiny
and the road opens just a bit
as I chance another quick look
as the sun slips away beyond view,
a bird soars on breezes above
and I am jealous
that though so truly blessed,
to feel that open space on my wings,
to dip and glide
nowhere to be
just in the now
leaving behind the crowd,
alone in thought
and words pour forth
perhaps I soar.
Likewise. ❤
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busy days, sigh, peace and blessings and a happy valentines day to you my friend ❤
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See you around. 🙂
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My pleasure, Kim. ❤
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always…..vile little things at times where I lived especially when the go very bright and the person ahead stops for no apparent reason and you almost rear end them 🙂
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thanks Betty ❤ me too ❤
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thanks so much Mags ❤
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bliss indeed ❤
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thanks so much E ❤
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I shall try 🙂 thanks Brian, will be by shortly to see what you’ve been up to ❤
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thank you so very much ❤
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So beautiful
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Do soar. 🙂
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You soar! What a gift you have for seeing into the present mundane moment, finding its blessing, and sharing it freely. 🙂 Thank you, dear Kim.
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the sense of freedom, not having to worry about fear, blessings
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Exciting and peaceful at the same time.
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I love that last line, Kim! 💕
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I love the mixture of breathless excitement and inner peace in this poems. It’s always great to get away from those angry tail lights, isn’t it?
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It is. You’re most welcome, Kim. 😊
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hey you, thanks so much, hope all is well ❤
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thanks Derrick ❤
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Soaring is good, so good 🙂 thanks Tre ❤
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“Perhaps, I soar”. A sound way to end it, Kim.
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Beautifully described
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I love it 🙂
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