“Meet me at the pond tonight at 7”. Jessica saw the email as soon as she opened her laptop. A thrill of excitement ran through her when she saw Jeremy’s address and glanced at the clock on the kitchen wall. It was 4:44 and she sighed, not much time to prepare. Her Siamese cat Calypso nuzzled her face as she proceeded to drape her body across the keyboard for some attention. Jessica lifted the purring beast, stroked its rabbit soft fur a few times and then deposited her onto the chair beside her. No time for loving my friend, I’ve got to get ready. She closed the laptop and jumped up from the chair.
Her closet was a myriad of silk and linen, she moved through them one by one before deciding on the sheer white half slip dress. Yes, this will do nicely she thought and hung it up on the bathroom hook on the door. She jumped into the shower and took extra care with her preparations. Coconut scent filled the air as the suds ran down the drain, her long hair sleek and falling to her hips, she rinsed off and wrapped up in her thick towel. Once her hair was perfectly quaffed into waving tendrils and her makeup minimally applied to her liking, she slipped into her favorite dress, the same one she had been wearing the last time they had met at the pond. A night that still woke her in an ecstatic mood a few times a week.
She thought it had been over, not hearing from him for two months as she had sent repeated emails to him. Summer turned into fall and she just assumed he wasn’t interested anymore. Jessica threw on a light overcoat and grabbing her purse, a blanket and her keys, jumped into her car to buy some champagne, berries, a loaf of crusty Italian bread and a nice round of brie. Jeremy was going to get the surprise of his life tonight she thought.
Jessica pulled into the gravel besides Jeremy’s car next to the fence and grabbed the bag of food. The champagne was chilling on ice in a silver bucket wedged between the seat and she pulled everything out, carrying it all through the opening and set it down beneath a tree beside the pond. The night was getting cooler and a fine mist was rising from the pond, she dipped her toe in and realized it was warmer than the air. Smiling, she pulled out the blanket and sat down. She looked around and realized Jeremy was nowhere to be found. Calling his name repeatedly and getting no response, she pulled out her phone and realized she was a half hour early. He must have gone hiking on the trail while he was waiting for her. Jessica was never on time and he knew this so she thought she’d change it up a bit and arrive early to prepare just in case he didn’t show till 7. She got up and walked back to his car. The black car was covered in dust. Jeremy was a stickler for promptness and his car was always immaculate. She tried the door and realized it was unlocked. A Starbucks cup was in the holder half filled with his favorite black coffee and she realized it was ice-cold.
Jessica, are you here yet? A voice interrupted her thoughts and she smiled. Perhaps he was changing after all, letting loose a bit and having fun for a change. He was gorgeous but so uptight she thought and shutting the door she headed back to the pond. The light had faded and she saw ripples moving across the water. A dark head was moving quickly, back and forth and she slipped off her overcoat to reveal the short white sheer gown she wore. She walked into the water slowly, watching him moving about and yelled out, a might cold for a swim don’t you think my love? But she kept moving deeper in, feeling the grasses move across her legs, caressing her with their soft yet slimy feeling tendrils. His head dipped below the water and she laughed seductively. Trying to freak me out my love? as her body kept moving deeper and deeper into the depths. She felt his hands touch her then, moving slowly up her legs, past her bottom and reaching to stroke her stomach. She dipped her head back as his hand found her breasts and she sighed softly into the night air. Dipping down till her chin hit the rippling water, she waited impatiently to gaze into his beautiful blue eyes once more.
His hands gripped her around her neck and he pulled her under. She fought as the weight of his body submerged her, swallowing water as her air supply diminished until there was nothing left. No one ever came to the surface.
Post note: Jeremy had died two months ago, drowning in the pond where he met Jessica after she had left that night.
Just a quick ghost story for Halloween.
thanks so very much, glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Awesome 👻
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it always is awesome, gotta start the day with a smile…and sometimes a creepy tale 🙂 peace and love Lorrie 🙂
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Ah!!! Didn’t see that one coming 😁
Hope you had a super holiday weekend and that the coming week will be awesome!!!
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Oh that’s great 😊
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Thanks so much, glad it’s just a story….it just floated to the top of my brain and fell out from there😃
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Though I don’t believe in ghost and all ,but your post is amazing.
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Ha, I had to open the post and read it….slowly waking up😃 and brrrrrr indeed😁thanks Rob
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Nice one…brrr!
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Haha! Precisely. Borges, the great writer from Argentina said: “I write for myself, my friends, and to sweeten the course of time”
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good thing I don’t take it personally, as I told him,I write for me, not him 🙂 he chuckled but knows I’m cool with it 🙂
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Spouses are not the best readers… 😉
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thanks Brian, even my husband enjoyed it….which is a plus of course, he rarely comments on my stuff 🙂
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Shivering. (And very good. I did not expect the ending which is top A+)
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ha, thanks E, glad you enjoyed, just a quick ghostly one for halloween 🙂
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hmmm…rationing…didn’t know you had it in you to do that 🙂 thanks Pasty poet….ha, I noticed 🙂
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You are very welcome, I enjoyed it 🙂
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thanks Quiall ❤
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thanks Grabbety ❤
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thanks Pragal, just a quick story to get the ghostly webs in my mind cleared out 🙂
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or she should have owned a dog, they’re always much smarter 🙂 ha, just kidding, thanks Jack, glad you enjoyed 🙂
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thanks Derrick, a little halloween story to stir the ghosts up 🙂
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eerie and erotic
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Damn dark and strangely sensual ~ Jessica should have stayed with the cat, Calypso knew something wasn’t right… ❤ ❤ 😉
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oooh! That was gripping !!! 🙂
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Wow! Great post!!
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oooh delicious!
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Spookily, intense – creepy and unnerving are just four of the words I could use to describe this – there are other words available – but, I am rationing them. G:)
PS where are you tre? I have lost contact with you. G:)
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Yikes! This one smokes…then drains the life out of you….very dreamlike with a dose of ghostly horror at the end. Happy Halloween! 🙂
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thanks Tre, it was a spur of the moment thing and I knew where it was going to go, I used to have a pond, the murkiness creeped me out 🙂 and I’m not one for blood and guts 🙂 so death by ghost it is 🙂 haha. Thanks and have an amazing Sunday. Football day for us, wings smoking on the grill and stuffed hot peppers. You getting the rain I sent your way, and the cooler temps? just kidding, we are at 69 degrees here, but still in shorts 🙂 peace and love and hugs to Jernee ❤
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Whoa! I was NOT expecting this! This is oddly beautiful, but in a creepy way. Remind me not to fall for men named “Jeremy” or women named “Jessica”. Nope. Nope. Nope. I wants no parts of this sendoff. Lol. Great story, Kim!
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