I remember the magic
As the dream slipping through my mind
like a blanket of fog
whispered images of form and
a beast that wandered the night
raising chills of vision and fear.
What is it there moving beyond view,
coming towards the edge of awareness.
She stands alone on the crest
mountains rose through clouds
as mist slowly filtered down
Silently cloaking her in obscurity,
the sound of hooves in grasses high,
memories of the past trickle by
somewhere in her mind she knows,
these lands still untamed by man
and the friends she knows by name
coming together in twillight harmony,
a mirage within
a dream of endless fog.
I couldn’t agree more. 🙂
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These last few mornings have been absent of fog, yet an hour later, frost is on the grass, but no snow, hallelujah , let’s keep that nastiness away is what I say😏
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Dreamy. ❤
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I think she likes that idea 🙂
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Looks like she’s going to blow… Lol 🙂
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lets hope not…..no more she cried, no more…..I can’t take it Captain….
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Sometimes things like that make you look at a piece more than if it had gone along typo-free. It’s looking good. Version 8 should be amazing. G:)
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Thanks so much, still tweaking the errors my goofy iPad keeps throwing in on me…it was a nice misty morning, but alas, no Buffalo…but I did see a few horses….pretty way to start the day.
Peace and love,
K
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See, there it goes again ….I think I shall rename it expensive POS…..it seems to fit…
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See, I told you the iPad was possessed…proof read twice and he. It tried to change things on its own…ghost in the machine, I swear.
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sweetly mystical morning mist 🙂
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Very much better – although a ‘the the’ scraped through into version 2 and a ‘?’ may be useful ending line 8. I do like the S-o-C flow and the ending is particularly fine.
Yes, your writing has been rather good as of late. G:)
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A bit better G man? I hope to trade the twitchy iPad in for a laptop…..can’t come soon enough 😊 hope you like it😊
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It’s been awhile….I must have been behaving till now😊 will check out my typos…future Botox….
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I like the imagery and it has a stream of consciousness feel to it; but, there are a few typos and it possibly needs a a bit of work to tighten up the flow as it feels a bit disjointed. Version 1 shall we say. G:)
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